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Tengo que hacer un articulo sobre las vacaciones en el extranjero o en el lugar donde vivimos: Holiday abroad or in your country Where do you go on your holidays? You go abroad or you get in your country with your friends? The holidays are the relaxing moment for students, workers,... This is the time that...
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Holidays are relaxing times for students and also for those who work. This is the time many individuals look forward to. In spite of this, (A pesar de eso) there's a big doubt, (hay una gran incertidumbre),
"where are we going for the holidays?".

Many like to go abroad, and forget about all their problems, yet others believe holidays are best spent with friends, and family; what do you think?

I prefer to go abroad, it's a way to meet new people, and visit new places, however, one must make a decision as to where to go.

In my infinite wisdom (tongue in cheek), holidays should be enjoyed, and use as an opportunity to relax, to do whatever you please, as long as you're having a good time.